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Triano Williams
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It Systems Administrator Helpdesk Manager at American College Of Education

Can you give me feedback on profile/resume

I am in Chicago, was forced out of my job in IT field because i could not move in 30 day. Been unemployed for about 10 month currently in School to get certs in CompTia A+, MS MCSA, and Cisco Ent. to add to my work experience

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Mark Bryan
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Hi Triano, Why did you have to move in order to keep your job in Chicago? I would start by having a few people look over your resume and check it for grammatical and spelling mistakes. Sometimes you do not always catch everything when it's your own creation. I think the format is pretty good but maybe add an "objective" at the top, so people know what you are looking for.

Here are some jobs in your area that may be interesting to you as well. http://www.jobcase.com/jobs/search?q=system+admin&l=chicago&r=25&group=company&sources%5B%5D=CB&sources%5B%5D=ID&sources%5B%5D=JC

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Mariah Bliss
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Hi Triano: Looks like you have a pretty solid profile! But I did notice you talk a lot about your functions, and not enough about results. How did you help your companies improve? How much did you improve processes by? Did you manage a team? Don't be afraid to toot your own horn - employers will definitely respond to it!

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